Good read, Chet! What a twist! No I didn’t figure it out :)
Michelle was playing with fire! Maybe she trusted her husband and thought her plan would be a good way to get Ruby out of his and her life no matter the cost. Psycho! :)
Another good one, Buddy. You've a pen for drama, certainly. Filling in the ending is fun, dead, or fake discharge and rises to hug Michelle while they laugh at John hysterically. Jail or no, he has a painful collarbone to heal.
Enjoyed this story and the twist at the end. Kept me reading .
Thank you, Martha!
Thank you. So nice of you to say that. But the frittata is long gone. 😊
I loved the story and the photo of the yummy fritatta dad! You are looking great, must be that Colorado air!
Good read, Chet! What a twist! No I didn’t figure it out :)
Michelle was playing with fire! Maybe she trusted her husband and thought her plan would be a good way to get Ruby out of his and her life no matter the cost. Psycho! :)
Thank you, Nataalie. Thanks for reading it. I really appreciate the feedback. It makes me a better writer.
Another good one, Buddy. You've a pen for drama, certainly. Filling in the ending is fun, dead, or fake discharge and rises to hug Michelle while they laugh at John hysterically. Jail or no, he has a painful collarbone to heal.
Thank you, my friend. You've got a wicked pen yourself, Don. You should write a little fiction...SCI FI...of course!